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 Post subject: Re: A Breaking Dawn Twist
PostPosted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 3:37 pm 
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Chapter 34


"What are you talking about Jake?" I asked
"It is NOT okay that she got kissed"
"Jacob." I rolled my eyes and turned away to tix Nessie an after school snack.
"You are honestly going to tolerate this?!" for some reason he was yelling
"Jacob, a little boy gave her a little kiss on the cheek for cleaning up some glue that he spilt. Its not that big of a deal."
"But she kissed somebody!"
"Okay, she kissed noone. The little boy kisses her. And if I dont recall, havent you kissed somebody Jake. Bad Jacob. Wait wasnt that person me! *tisk**tisk**tisk* If I were you I wouldnt be talking right now." why was he making such a big deal?
"Shut up Bella," he said "Renesmee, go to your room. Your grounded for kissing that boy."
"Exuse me. Dont tell my daughter what to do. Renesmee, you are not grounded. Why dont you go and spend some time with daddy." she left as i said that.
"You cant do anything right can you bella." he said as he walked away. That set me off. I walked over and smacked him on the back of the head.
"You seem a little confused Jake. I tell my daughter what to do. I am her mother and you are somebody who eats all of our food."

"Ha!" he laughed "Some mother you are! You are one of the worst mothers I have ever seen. That girl would be better off with someone who does drugs! Face it Bells, you're not a good mom."

Who the HELL does he thnk he is! I could deal with him saying that kissing boys is wrong, I coud deal with him saying I shouldnt have allowed it, but I andt deal with him critisizing my mothering skills! Screw him!

I walked tword him. I was wearing heels so I was as tall as he was. Our faces were almost touching." Say it again." I said


He said it slowly "You...Are...A...Bad...Mother."


That was it



TO BE CONTINUED....

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 Post subject: Re: A Breaking Dawn Twist
PostPosted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 11:40 am 
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sorry, its a short chapter :blush:

Chapter 35


"Get out of my house Jacob." I said calmly
"Why should I?"
"I said to get the hell out of my house!" I screamed
"Dont you think you are overreacting?" he said
"Overreacting?! Youre the one whos overreacting!"

We were ouside now. I wish this would stop, I didnt want to fight with Jacob. I didnt really have a choice though if he was going to act like this.

He took a deep breath to calm himself. He put his hands on his head. It looked like he was about to pull all of his hair out.

"Jake, whats going on?" I asked, calm now
"I have no idea Bella. I dont feel like myself. It feels like someone else is inside my body."
"What can I do jake?"
"I dont know. But there is definatley something wrong. I cant take it much longer. Its getting to be too much."

I was really worried about him. He has been acting so strange latley, we needed to figure this thing out fast, before its too late and Jake decides to take care of it himself.

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 Post subject: Re: A Breaking Dawn Twist
PostPosted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 11:45 am 
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 Post subject: Re: A Breaking Dawn Twist
PostPosted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 3:39 pm 
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Chapter 36


Jade and I were inside the cabin. He was telling me what it felt like when someone was controlling you.

"You know what it feels like when Jasper controls your emotions? Its kind of like that, only it feels like you are fighting to stay in control of yourself. What you say, what you feel, you have no control over it."
"Do you know whats causing it?" i asked
"No. That is whats so frustrating about it. The only thing I can think of That would cause it, is me imagining it. But I swear im not imagining it!"He sounded kind of crazy.
"How often does it happen?"
"Every few days, whenever im at the cottage. Im really sorry for what I said Bells. I didnt mean it. Your a great mom." He said
"Its okay Jake. Next time it happens I will just slap it out of you." I said reassuringly
"Thanks. I think."
"No problem."

Then the phone rang.

"Hello?" I said when I picked it up
"Hi. Im Calling for a Bella Cullen." A man asked
"This is she."
"I can see you. I know your secret."

He hing up and so did I. I instinctevly looked outside, but I saw noone there.

"That sounded really creepy." Jake said
"It was, lets go and tell Edward. Maybe it was just on of the boys trying to freak us out."
"Lets go."

We ran to the big house

TO BE CONTINUED....




p.s. Pretty soon here I am going to start a new story in Originals. dont have a name for it yet. Keep on the lookout though!!

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 Post subject: Re: A Breaking Dawn Twist
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I'm scared what if someone really does know there secret it won't be safe in Forks anymore and they will have to leave! that would be just sad!

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 Post subject: Re: A Breaking Dawn Twist
PostPosted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 6:25 pm 
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Chapter 37


"where did Edward go?" I asked Alice when I realized that he wasnt there.
"He went to Charlies." she replied
"Did he take the Bolbo?" Jake asked
"Yes, Why?"
"Sweet. We get to take the Ferrari!"

We climed into the car and drove to my dads house. When we pulled up. I could seee Edwards car. I parked next to it. Jacob and I walked throught the front door.

"Hey Jake! Hey Bella!" my dad said as we walked through the door
"Hi dad! Hi Renesmee!" I said. Nessie was sitting on his lap watching cartoons.
"I get to stay with Grandpa for a week!" she exclaimed
"Cool!" I said in shock. "Where is Edward?"
"Upstairs getting Nessies bedroom ready." Charlie said

Jake and I walked upstairs. Edward was hanging up some of Nessies clothes in the closet.

"Edward, I just got this phone call..." I started
"Yeah i know. That is why we are hiding Nessie, so we have time to fix it."
"Waht are you talking about, why are we hiding Nessie?" I said
"Because the same person who gave you that phone call wants Nessie."


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 Post subject: Re: A Breaking Dawn Twist
PostPosted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 3:52 pm 
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Chapter 38


"What!?" I said
"I will explain in the car. Lets go." Edward sounded stiff

We walked down the stairs and said our goodbyes to Charlie and Renesmee. I quietly shut the front door and ran to the car, and got into the passenger seat. Edward was driving and Jake was in the back.

"Okay Edward, now well me whats going on." I said
"The person who called you, it was Joham. Nahuels father. He is building an army of half vampires. He wants Nessie in his army. Its the same person who has been messing with Jake. That is his gift."
"Seriously. Why does he do that to me?" Jake asked
"Because he is trying to seperate us so he has a clear shot at Renesmee. He was hoping Bella would send you away when you yelled at her. Obvoulsy it didnt go as planned."
"Do we know where joham is?" I asked
"Not exactly. We only know that he is in Forks." Edward replied
"Well on the phone he said he could see me." I said
"What!?"
"Thats what he said."
"Okay, new rule, noone goes into the cottage. I guess he is watching the place."
"Well thats good." Jake said

Why would it be good that someone is watching my house?


"Why?" I asked
"Because now we know he is close by. Duh."


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 Post subject: Re: A Breaking Dawn Twist
PostPosted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 11:07 am 
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Chapter 39


There were hundreds of different scents out here. We were looking to see if we could pick up Johams trail, but it was hard to find. He brought at least 12 other half human half vampires with him. They had been all over! They even had the nerve to go into my cottage.

"Edward, dont know where his scent leads! Its all over the place!" I said
"Thats because he is smart. He sent each one of his little friends in a different direction."

So for four hours we followed the scents. As it turns out he brought 14 people with him. We had to follow each one. They all led back to the ocean. We didnt event follow the last scent, because we knew where it would lead. Edward and I decided to sit on a boulder. Jake wanted to follow the last scent.

"Are we ever going to find him?" I asked
"I dont know, but he is teasing me."
"How is he teasing you?"
"Well, he can see us, and he is purposley thinking about it."

I instantly scanned th trees, I even tried to see in the river. The Jake came running throught the bushes, scaring me in the process.

"You guys! Come quick!" he yelled
We followed Jake into the woods. He was talking to us as he was running.
"So I followed the last acent, and look what I found!" he said

Just then we ran into a clearing. There was a fire pit that was still smoking, and benches, blankets, and empty plates around it.

"Its over here." Jake said

We walked over to where he pointed. I looked at the ground and saw writing.

I KNOW WHERE SHE IS.


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 Post subject: Re: A Breaking Dawn Twist
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Didn't really expecting this....

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 Post subject: Re: A Breaking Dawn Twist
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^Neither did I And I'm good at stuff like that! UGH! your killing me again. Update soon please.

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 Post subject: Re: A Breaking Dawn Twist
PostPosted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 4:42 pm 
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Im keeping you on your toes arent I. lol.

Chapter 40


If I was able to cry, I would have. No matter what I dod, my daughter wasnt safe. We were racing to my dads house so we could pick Renesmee up. As it turns out, Joham is somewhere in town. Or at least thats where his scent leads. Plus Edward cant read his thoughts, so he isnt close by.

We got to my dads house. His crusier wasnt there. So we all just went inside and sat on the couch, waiting for him to come home.

"Edward, what are we going to do?" I said
"I dont know, but we will figure it out."
"Jake?" I asked
"Yeahh?"
"Will you go upstairs and pack Nessies things?"
"Sure."

He went slowly up the stairs. We couldnt leave Nessie here with Charliej, it wont be safe for either of them. Both of them will be disappointed. Where are going to hide her? We could take her to Renee. She finally met her granddaughter a few months ago. She almost cried when she saw how I looked, but she adores Nessie.

"Bella! Edward!" Jake shouted from upstairs. We both ran to my old room.
"NONE of her stuff is HERE!" Jake shouted.

We looked in the closet, dresser, and under the bed. There was no sign of my daughter anywhere.

Then I heard my dad pull in. We all rushed downstairs to ask Charlie where Renesmee was.


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 Post subject: Re: A Breaking Dawn Twist
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 Post subject: Re: A Breaking Dawn Twist
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OMG!!! :OMG: im freaking out here!!! i need to know whats going to happen

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